Invitation wording?

i think it looks good as is. I think people usually put the time/date before the address of the ceremony

It's fine, don't you have better things to think about? NObody will scrutinize it the way you will!

Sounds good to me, quite formal as well if that is the style you are going for.

I think the way you have it worded and spaced are appropriate.

I think it's lovely, best of luck to you both.

It's fine.

Perfect, this is done beautifully with all the right information where it should go. Congratulations!

it is very beautifully worded and spaced. it's proper to put the date before the address. looks great! congratulations!

7 :30 gosh thats early...... i would put the brides parents full names

Love it, but take out the word intimate. It is not necessary. The ceremony location should be last. If there is no reply card, then you must put R.S.V.P. which means a reply is requested. This should be on last line on invitation Put R.S.V.P. by 6/12/07
and then a phone number
What I would do is look at wedding invitations on the internet and how they are spaced. Make sure you space and center everything. Good Luck

exchange their vows of love and marriage.

Spacing is fine. Nothing about RSVP. Just center the wording on the paper and everything should look fine.

Congratulations.

I'd center it on the page, not left align. And Time and date, then location.
The wording is fine.

Here are my suggestions:
1) Place a comma after "Together with their parents,"
2) "Two Thousand Seven" (omit "and")
3) May I assume the words will be centered on the page?
Looks great otherwise. Have a good life!

Second paragraph, take out the 'and'

Together with there parents, (place comma)
Brides first middle last. (period)
(speaks for itself)(no and)

Grooms first middle last, (place comma) shows intention
invite you to etc..................

Saturday.....Ceremonial address
(use numbers not letters 11/08/2007 10:30am)
Street address
Town,State

You have to get rid of the word "intimate" regardless of why you put it in there. The spacing is fine. Put the luncheon information left flush bottom corner

I'm an editor, so I can help you here:
1. Put "and" before "uniting" on line 3.
2. Put "on" before "Saturday"
3. "at ten-thirty in the morning" should read "at half after ten o'clock in the morning" for a formal invitation.

Delete the space before the ceremony information. This way, your invitation is divided into three sections: the saying on the top that sets the mood, the wedding info, and the reception info. Also, consider using a small cap or modern font for all the text on the invitation, except for your name and your groom's name, which can be in a big cursive font that stands out from the rest of the information.

Is the luncheon reception in the same location as the church? If so, the way you have it worded is fine. However, if it's somewhere else, then you need to have a separate reception card.

EDIT: Formal wedding invitations do not have commas at the end of lines like you'd see if you were reading in a paragraph form.

That is just lovely! Make sure the size of your invitation will fit all of those lines though! You want to make sure that it's not only spaced beautifully (which you've done) but that the letters & font chosen will still be easy enough to read when printed.